What do Katy Perry, Charles Dickens, and the Bible all have in common? They’re responsible for some of the most famous lines in history. And in this episode, you’ll find out why.
Mark, an author and mad scientist of language, reveals the secret sauce to memorable writing: rhetorical devices. Chiasmus. Anaphora. Antithesis. Synecdoche.
Writing today (i.e. texting and Tweeting) is concise and hyper-minimal — which is fine, if you’re writing the instruction manual for a new dishwasher. But the most memorable works of writing lean into the beauty of words. It’s not about using overly purple prose. It’s about using rhetorical formulas to create unforgettable lines, to shape ideas that stick in your reader’s brain.
If you want to write something that sticks in your reader’s brain — a book, a poem, a speech — then this episode is for you.
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TIMESTAMPS:
00:00:00 Introduction
00:02:00 The progressio of Katy Perry, Charles Dickens, The Bible
00:05:00 The signal for readers to pay attention
00:05:55 Mark's bestselling book "The Elements of Eloquence"
00:07:25 How we lost the appreciation for rheotoric writing
00:10:30 Martin Luther King Jr's speech "I Have A Dream"
00:11:10 What tactics are "Bond, James Bond" and "To be or not to be"
00:12:45 The memorable (and missing) lines from "Wizard of Oz"
00:14:10 Writing tactic used by John F. Kennedy and Coolio
00:17:45 Mark's cheatsheet and writing process
00:22:55 Rhetorical devices used by Yoda and The Beatles
00:28:50 Inventing words, old slang, and dictionaries
00:32:00 How, smart phones, texting, and Twitter has changed writing
00:37:35 Writing tactic used by Winston Churchill
00:38:30 Most quoted lines in poetry like Alexander Pope, Tennyson,
00:40:15 How readers should read your words
00:45:00 How Shakespeare was a wonderful thief
00:47:10 Mark's writing process for his book "The Elements of Eloquence"
00:54:25 Writing Example (Jerry Seinfeld)
PODCAST LINKS:
Website: https://writeofpassage.com/how-i-write
Apple: https://podcasts.apple.com/us/podcast...
Spotify: https://open.spotify.com/show/2DjMSbo...
ABOUT THE HOST:
I’m David Perell and I’m a writer, teacher, and podcaster. I believe writing online is one of the biggest opportunities in the world today. For the first time in human history, everybody can freely share their ideas with a global audience. I seek to help as many people publish their writing online as possible.
How I Write is a podcast by Write of Passage // Production by Adam Soccolich
What do Katy Perry, Charles Dickens, and the Bible all have in common? They’re responsible for some of the most famous lines in history. And in this episode, you’ll find out why.
Mark, an author and mad scientist of language, reveals the secret sauce to memorable writing: rhetorical devices. Chiasmus. Anaphora. Antithesis. Synecdoche.
Writing today (i.e. texting and Tweeting) is concise and hyper-minimal — which is fine, if you’re writing the instruction manual for a new dishwasher. But the most memorable works of writing lean into the beauty of words. It’s not about using overly purple prose. It’s about using rhetorical formulas to create unforgettable lines, to shape ideas that stick in your reader’s brain.
If you want to write something that sticks in your reader’s brain — a book, a poem, a speech — then this episode is for you.
WRITING EXAMPLES:
Sign up and learn from the best writing of all time:
https://www.writingexamples.com
TIMESTAMPS:
00:00:00 Introduction
00:02:00 The progressio of Katy Perry, Charles Dickens, The Bible
00:05:00 The signal for readers to pay attention
00:05:55 Mark's bestselling book "The Elements of Eloquence"
00:07:25 How we lost the appreciation for rheotoric writing
00:10:30 Martin Luther King Jr's speech "I Have A Dream"
00:11:10 What tactics are "Bond, James Bond" and "To be or not to be"
00:12:45 The memorable (and missing) lines from "Wizard of Oz"
00:14:10 Writing tactic used by John F. Kennedy and Coolio
00:17:45 Mark's cheatsheet and writing process
00:22:55 Rhetorical devices used by Yoda and The Beatles
00:28:50 Inventing words, old slang, and dictionaries
00:32:00 How, smart phones, texting, and Twitter has changed writing
00:37:35 Writing tactic used by Winston Churchill
00:38:30 Most quoted lines in poetry like Alexander Pope, Tennyson,
00:40:15 How readers should read your words
00:45:00 How Shakespeare was a wonderful thief
00:47:10 Mark's writing process for his book "The Elements of Eloquence"
00:54:25 Writing Example (Jerry Seinfeld)
PODCAST LINKS:
Website: https://writeofpassage.com/how-i-write
Apple: https://podcasts.apple.com/us/podcast...
Spotify: https://open.spotify.com/show/2DjMSbo...
ABOUT THE HOST:
I’m David Perell and I’m a writer, teacher, and podcaster. I believe writing online is one of the biggest opportunities in the world today. For the first time in human history, everybody can freely share their ideas with a global audience. I seek to help as many people publish their writing online as possible.
How I Write is a podcast by Write of Passage // Production by Adam Soccolich
What does the writing of Katy Perry, Hemingway, and The Bible have in common?
Mark Forsyth has the answer. He studied history's greatest writers and noticed how they used the same rhetorical formulas.
Here's what you need to know:
1. The formulas are timeless (and still work).
2. Where to begin? Try taking the last word of one sentence and repeating it as the first word in the next. It gives the illusion of logic. Like this one from Yoda: "Fear leads to anger. Anger leads to hatred. Hatred leads to suffering."
3. An example from Malcolm X: "Once you change your philosophy, you change your thought pattern. Once you change your thought pattern, you change your attitude. Once you change your attitude, it changes your behavior pattern and then you go on into some action."
4. It's a mystery why, but people love to hear a string of words that begins with the same letter. "Two to Tango" is a heck of a lot more memorable than "Two to Waltz."
5. From his book, Elements of Eloquence: "Adjectives in English absolutely have to be in this order: opinion-size-age-shape-colour-origin-material-purpose Noun."
6. People will tell you to write only what's necessary, but endless repetition can be a way to emphasize something. Katy Perry's repetition of opposites is logically unnecessary, but it works: "'Cause you're hot then you're cold, You're yes then you're no, You're in then you're out, You're up then you're down, You're wrong when it's right, It's black and it's white, We fight, we break up, We kiss, we make up."
7. Wedding vows have the same kind of repetition: "For better or for worse, for richer or poorer, in sickness and in health..."
8. JFK leaned on a rhetorical device called a Chiasmus, where you take the first half of a sentence and say it backward. You see it in sentences like "Mankind must put an end to war—or war will put an end to mankind" and "Ask not what your country can do for you—ask what you can do for your country."
9. I like the Chiasmus because it's so easy to implement. Here's another example of a Chiasmus, like when Cormac McCarthy wrote: "You forget what you want to remember, and you remember what you want to forget."
10. Language is ruled by the mob. Doesn't matter what the committees think. If everybody uses a word in a certain way, then that's what it means.
11. Most of Shakespeare's famous lines are simply examples of famous formulas.
12. Shakespeare often "stole" content from other people, but he improved what he stole by using rhetorical formulas and figures of speech. Mark insists that he had Thomas North’s translation of Plutarch open while writing Julius Caesar.
13. Write two things that connect, then add a twist for the third thing. The magic comes from the surprise. An example is: "Lies, damned lies, and statistics." Another is: "Life, liberty, and the pursuit of happiness."
14. Sometimes, the things that stick will simply surprise you. One of the most famous lines in film history only has three words: "Bond. James Bond."
15. The James Bond-style line is called a Diacope. Other examples are "Burn, baby, burn" and "Zed’s dead, baby, Zed’s dead."