Bought a peter storm coat and the first rain I encountered went straight through it.  Berghauss and fjall raven are the best I've owned.

In another very similar video Mountain Warehouse are slated. This is AI slop

You need to improve the edit quality. I have experience in faceless editing and also worked in this niche.

Saying that Alpkit has no shops is totally incorrect, there is an Alpkit store in the town where I live, Ilkley West Yorkshire, by the amount of information you have wrong on this company alone makes the rest of your video totally   suspect at best, also the information offered about RAB is incorrect, choosing this AI voiceover is also a poor idea seeing as it's used across multiple other channels all spouting the same inaccuracies.