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If this video does insanely well, I will consider doing a sequel for rewriting Lil Miss Rarity 👀

Thank y’all for all of the amazing comments! I love hearing everyone’s personal experiences with a subject like this, especially when your perspectives are different than my own. It gives me a chance to learn more about the spooky pony stories I grew up with! Thank you! 💚💜

I remember having like a huge argument with the author of muffins saga when I was 14 💀

I honestly like Little Miss Rarity, but it's definitely not for kids and it's a shame that so many minors stumbled upon it

The biggest thing that frustrated me with this series is how the bakers always won. The last crusade was especially frustrating because Sweetie and Scoots worked so hard and it would have been so satisfying to see Sweetie taking revenge like she was planning to. Like you can’t just make the bakers win every time it’s bad story telling. It makes them less engaging

With the whole thing about Stella, the OG Muffins author is fucking insane. So who knows what that “betrayal” actually was. It could have been a typical situation where the author blew things way out of proportion.

I’m gonna be honest the author might of projected their own traumas and stresses onto Minkie. From what sounds like projection of religious trauma, to venting through Minkie… yeah.

0/10 Didnt start with "hello everypony"

I lost all respect for the author of Muffins, but I'm obsessed with the story

When people talk about the main cast of mlp I feel like ppl forget spike!? There was episode in mlp talking about him being a dumb side character, so it’s such shame no one used him in  grim dark that I know of?

I've known the author of Muffins since 2014, so I'm unfortunately a witness to the said drama and how dangerously easy it is to set her off. I think she's going to get mad at this and will try to do something about it.
Good luck.

I think the worst creepypasta I was exposed to as a kid was Sweet Apple Massacre. It was straight up just pedo incest gore porn.

diagnosed autistic here, your friend's notes are genuinely fucking hilarious. SO HAPPY u got an autistic on there to help you point out the horrendous amount of ableism in there holy shit, u got a new subscriber btw :)

Hi!! Writer and artist of Rotten Harmony here! Thank you so much for mentioning my work! The comic started on impulse so I couldn’t have dreamed it getting the attention it did! Thanks again!!❤

So, I play an official MLP mobile game. It's pretty simple, but full of obscure references and every background character you can imagine. Derpy's there, with her crossed eyes, but not by the name Derpy. She's called..... Muffins. I am not joking. I am horrified to think which "Muffins" came first and if they're really associated

I feel like after being pressured for literally months to continue writing, the author said "Yeah fuck this" and just made it absolutely insane. The writing compared from the middle chapters to the last chapters are very clearly different and it's obvious the author was under insane amounts of stress at this time yet people kept begging and pushing them to do more. The last chapters feel more like a "fuck you." to the people who pressured her than actual entries to the series

Can we just talk about the ableism of their first victim? Killing a depressed character to make them happy? Oh yeah, like real depressed people (such as myself) don't struggle with that. (Don't worry person reading this comment, I'm okay)

Back before I understood how back Muffins was, and I was an edgelord full time,  I liked it well enough, but looking back is more than just cringe.

Also, poor Derpy. Why did the characters talk down to her so much? As someone also with autism, I had to pause the video and scream.

Muffins over time has aged badly. On a recent re-watch, I've realized how badly written this fic truly is. Babs ruined the story altogether because the author thinks a kid is capable of taking down adult ponies and suddenly has no empathy! Not to mention the whole "earth ponies overthrowing Gods" was so dumb

I was never in the MLP Creepypasta fandom so watching this video was a trip and a half😀

4:32 apple sleep experiment will always be my favorite story in MLP media ngl. Also rarity’s new patterns was/is amazing.

So I want to leave my thoughts now that I’ve finished the video:

1) I am pretty sure the alicorn ending thing (which was on her Wordpress) was intended to be a “oh, you think I’m a shitty writer? yeahhh, sureee. by the way, spoilers: [something over the top].” She has expressed that she hates spoilers, and responded to a Quotev comment heavily implying the bakers will fall. As well as the fact another chapter is called ‘Kamikaze’ (I wish I was joking about that)
2) I would say that Peppo did have an affect on Blinkie, as Inkie uses it to manipulate her in Inkie’s Stellar Obsession. Otherwise, Blinkie is a pretty undeveloped character with her only traits being angry, love animal, jealous. (And my favourite cuz she wasn’t ruined lol)
3) You skipped over Silence Is Silver, and I can imagine why. It is far worse than Broken Tiara on the manipulation front, and considering the authors actions in the past… it really isn’t treated like manipulation. (note: you did, nvm, but I still stand by my opinions.)
3) The Fun Never Ends is a kinda annoying chapter. Not only does it go against Pinkie’s characterisation but it focuses on Twilight being tormented for things the author doesn’t like about her.
4) I’d argue Grudge Of A Bad Seed is a bad chapter that had potential to be amazing. The bullies characterisation is just… yeah… it’s obviously projecting things the author hates and demonising it.
4) Personally, I don’t find Sting that gross, but it does seem to lack self-awareness, push hate onto mentally ill people who’s mental illness doesn’t manifest in a specific way, and is solely there to shit on fan OC’s.
5) I’m glad you brought up that thumbnail about derpy. it always rubbed me the wrong way.
5) your rewrite is pretty interesting. I’m curious to learn more.

Misc ~fun~ trivia:

• Apparently Derpy is asexual because well- she doesn’t understand it. Why? Oh. Anyone can take a guess. The other characters also have weird reasoning. For example, Inkie is bi because “she isn’t very open minded so she wouldn’t be willing to date someone who isn’t female or male”. Because as we all know… that is EXACTLY how sexuality works. /s
• Inkie was originally going to be schizophrenic and Blinkie is supposed to have BPD (even though she shows zero symptoms).
• It’s implied that unlike in the show where Pinkie’s family are based off the Amish, they literally are Amish. Cloudy quotes the Bible in All That Glitters for example.
• I could go on. But I’m already frying my brain.

The response to criticism I can easily debunk. “I have autistic friends and they’re super intelligent, blah blah blah, Derpy isn’t autistic” okay right but her writing is still a bit off?

“Suspension of disbelief” does not work for LWC. It’s supposed to come naturally not be forced by the reader. And the “real life serial killers” she uses to prove “real mary sues exist” she greatly exaggerated the reality of. For example, the story of H.H Holmes has always been sensationalised and exaggerated. I’m not even mad about the bakers taking over Equestria I’m mad no one to oppose them is left alive to care about. Like the mane 6 are gone. All that’s left is the princesses but they have the intellect of a rock apparently. To make the bakers smarter, everyone else is reduced to a pebble:”.

Also, the Royal guards not recognising Walkie Talkie speak (which is CB channel codes iirc from my research) is funny. And the fact Cascade/Sharpshooter had zero preparation for her arrival.

I don’t want this comment to become 10,000 words but one last thing. I think a more interesting thing for Inkie’s Stellar Obsession could be been if Inkie took Stella up on her offer to keep her prisoner. Would’ve been interesting idk. But nope. Every story ends the same way. sighhh
• Minkie existing makes zero sense. The story that revealed a third sister existed explicitly said something along the line of “your older sister is doing work on the rock farm” or something. So why didn’t the author go off that? I guess it’s not that big of a deal… but still.

Oh, and the way cutie marks work in this world is… interesting…

Yeah I’m done. The more I try to get my thoughts out the more my head hurts. I will say this though. When I was younger, 2015, I stumbled across The Revenge Of Obsidian Pie and Broken Tiara. I was too scared to listen to anything else, being young, but those inspired me in good ways and bad ways. If it wasn’t for that, I might have not developed my interest in writing. So finding out years later, I believe 2019-2020 when I found Muffins again, that the author wasn’t a good person, and the writing wasn’t the best… was interesting.

Muffins was certainly a product of its time. That’s all I can really say.