Kahani tu s ea amoz hay meger both sari baateen ghair zaroori hain.itni choti choti tefseel dainy ki zaroret nahi hoti.kahani qerdh ker tu aisa lega eidi k elawa her adra like Sahara bcorrupt.hay.

Khani achi ha sabk aamooz ha

Bohot achi story hai

Asslamamu alaikum writer sahib.mujhy ap ki sb kahanian bht psand ati han .ap ki stories ko parh kr dunia ki actual aur bhayank shakal nzr ati ha . very good 👍. keep it up.

Good

Nice voice....

Good, keep it up .❤❤❤❤🎉

Boring