This one was very good. The story was well written, character development believeable, and the narrator was appropriate - both in voice and rate of speech. However, it became irritating that the 'voice balloons' continually pointed to the wrong person. But thanks, I look forward to your next one. Improve your production quality. Don't let us down.
However, it became irritating that the 'voice balloons' continually pointed to the wrong person.
But thanks, I look forward to your next one. Improve your production quality. Don't let us down.