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I Wrote This Novel in ONE DAY (No AI). Here’s What I Got Wrong

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A WORDSLINGER STORY CUT

I wrote my novel Evergreen—about 60,000 words—in a single 18-hour day.

Years later, it remains one of the books readers mention most often, one of my wife’s favorites, and one of my stories that has attracted the most interest from film and television. But that doesn’t mean I got everything right.

In this Wordslinger Story Cut, I turn the microscope on my own work. I break down what I think Evergreen does well, where the storytelling falls short, and what decades of additional writing experience have taught me about pacing, character development, exposition, coincidence, setup and payoff, escalating stakes, and endings.

I even let AI critique the book—and sometimes I agree with it. Sometimes I don’t.

If you’re interested in why stories work, why they sometimes don’t, and what writers can learn by looking critically at their own work, this one is for you.

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TIMECODES

00:00 Why I’m reviewing one of my own novels
00:53 How I wrote a 60,000-word novel in one day
02:32 Why Evergreen became one of my most memorable books
04:10 Letting AI critique my own work
05:16 The storytelling hook: stealing memories with a touch
06:12 Using inner voices to handle exposition
08:06 Escalating from street-level stakes to the President
09:22 Creating an emotional spine for the story
10:15 Building memorable set pieces
11:20 How ticking clocks create tension
12:51 Why limitations make powers more interesting
15:15 Weakness #1: Mid-book sprawl
16:51 Weakness #2: Coincidence and convenience
20:09 Weakness #3: Supporting characters
22:35 Weakness #4: Setup and payoff came too late
24:43 Weakness #5: An ending that wrapped things up too neatly
26:42 The “ship in a bottle” storytelling problem
28:31 What I changed when writing the sequel
29:34 What I learned from critiquing my own novel

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11 Comments

@matthewperry9243 2 weeks ago

Yeah, you spent the next 30 days editing and revising and likely adding a considerable amount. In 18 hours you might have a 50-60,000 word vomit with minimal structure. Having said that, at least you did that. More than I can say for myself. I can put the structure together, design the world and characters and set some anchor scenes in a day, but I need at least a week to get that much on a page. Even then, for me, I need a month to get to anything I'm willing to consider "finished". Thanks for sharing your experience.

@TaniasWritingRealm 2 weeks ago

You worked hard to grow this audience, you have the right to promote yourself 👏

@ProfessorUdGuru 3 days ago

The difference between this book I just drafted in 6 weeks and the book I wrote out of teen angst 50 years ago was 50 years of living. I like the advice from a youtuber who said there are only two criteria: get the reader interested and keep them interested. The rest of the rules are just tips and tricks. Good story comes out of living, including the experience of writing all the time because you love to write. Life experience adds up to something that storytelling needs.

@NintendoTherapyPodcast 2 weeks ago

I’m still a beginner writer, and I’m not trying to sound confrontational when I ask this, but if you wrote the book in a day and then spend 30 days fixing it, wouldn’t it be more accurate to say you wrote a draft in a day?

@milestrombley1466 2 weeks ago

I couldn't write a novel in one day. I'm slow and I can easily get distracted. 🤣

@Hyporea 2 weeks ago (edited)

I almost bought Evergreen, the cover was visually appealing. It separated the book from others that was in the list. The coloring and the title played well. I ended up purchasing the Lovelock Protocol. But I may swing back to purchase Evergreen soon. That cover really lingers in my mind, I think.

@evakuhlbornefelt34 2 weeks ago

Entertaining and helpful. Very interesting to lool under the hood of this novel snd the process. Thank you. I'd like to here another one.

@erictrobin 12 days ago (edited)

I got a novel done in one day too! It was during my vacation on Mercury. There is no wi-fi or other distractions and a day lasts six months. Can't recommend enough, but turn on the fan

@MageGrayWolf 2 weeks ago

Rogue from X-Men without the coma side effects on the person being touched.

@pw9522 2 weeks ago

Cool concept, haven’t read it so I dunno but if it fades in 30 min can he WRITE DOWN any info he needs. Or can he think the info from their brains and then just remember his own memory of things he now has thought himself and known… know what I mean

@vincentlau7042 11 days ago

You could spend 30 days writing a book but you can't spend the 30 seconds to ask any real human to give you real feedback. 🤦‍♂️ Why did YouTube recommend me this crap