⚠️ Estas 7 PALABRAS delatan a un escritor PRINCIPIANTE‼️
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These 7 words seem harmless, but they can weaken your scenes and make your novel sound amateurish. Learn when to delete them, when they work, and how to replace them with more precise actions, images, and verbs. Because better writing isn't about using more words, but about making better choices.
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De las siete palabras que has dicho, confieso que mi demonio personal es el "parece". Tengo que hacer auténticas escabechinas cuando reviso, porque todo son "parecía peligroso", "parecía que se movía", "parecía que los miraba con desconfianza", etc. En fin...
Afuera el viento soplaba y resoplaba entre los encinos, ululando como un fantasma. Quizo levantarse y buscar algo de comer, pero sus piernas se doblaron y cayó de bruces al suelo.
En él, el frio se multiplicaba con creces. No tuvo fuerzas para levantarse, y el frio terminó metiéndose por su ropa, hasta helarle la piel.
Solo, perdido, enfermo y hambriento. Por un instante comprendió el sufrimiento que convirtio a Duranguillo en un pueblo fantasma"
Dicho de esta manera, espero puedas darme tu opinión que escribí de la errónea frase sobre Laura, al estilo que imagino. Dice así:
–Avanzando por el pasillo, Laura camina con cautela. Con la piel de gallina, un cosquilleo que recorre desde sus piernas hasta su cuello y un nudo en su garganta. «Me están siguiendo», encorvada pensaba, mientras atemorizada continúa despacio.
Excelente vídeo, y excelente contenido, maestro.
⚠️ Estas 7 PALABRAS delatan a un escritor PRINCIPIANTE‼️
Puedes Escribir
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These 7 words seem harmless, but they can weaken your scenes and make your novel sound amateurish. Learn when to delete them, when they work, and how to replace them with more precise actions, images, and verbs. Because better writing isn't about using more words, but about making better choices.
YOU CAN WRITE is a channel for those who want to stop daydreaming about writing and start doing it for real.
Here we talk about creative writing, novels, characters, conflict, structure, craft, and effective writing: the kind that not only sounds beautiful but also makes the reader want to keep reading.
Because writing is art, yes. But it's also method, work, and craft.
If you want to write a novel, finish your stories, and learn to tell them more effectively, this channel is for you.
#YouCanWrite #CreativeWriting #WriteANovel #TipsForWriters #EffectiveWriting #Storytelling #Writers
Buen vídeo! Gracias!!