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More please keep it up and part 2 awesome videos as always

I need more of this story

Okay this story is very good I did like all the plot line was going I do wish it was a lot longer I hope you come back and make it part 2 and keep up the good work

Please put out a part 2 & 3, I love this story so far and I can't wait for the next part ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤Please keep up the great work ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

Part 2 please

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part 2 pls pls !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Next part please

part 2

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I've really tried to listen to this in a couple of times but his Total disregard of Hinata after the kyubi gaving the chance to have multiple Women. I can't get past that it's another of these Hinata hating books which I don't understand because it's become a cliche. There are more cases of Naruto dissing on Hinata, than ones where they actually hooked up. All are thinking, Oh, I'm doing something new. No, you're not.  You're just going against the original story when everybody else is doing the same thing. I can count on 2 hands. The really good fan fictions that actually hook him up on Hinata. I have read close to 300 of these. It's less than 10 percent Where he actually hooks up with Hinata and another thing is, I've had remarks back about all we just don't want to do what the cannon did. Well, that's just it you're doing what every other fanfiction is doing. That's fine with me, but I'm gonna make a comment because if you didn't want comments, don't post them on a public forum.  And I'm not talking about this specific author but I've had other authors. Actually try to chew my butt out. And I point out you're on a public forum. Why are you jumping on me for expressing my opinion? Cause I'm not trashing the story. It's a pretty good story. But I can't get past the Hinata hating stories because there's so many of them. And yes, I know there's other ones that hook up with different people.  But more often than not they're, they're trashing on the one true love story in all of the Naruto's stories. The most purest love in the original series was him and Hinata, and it took them forever to finally hook up. Why everybody makes it was obvious, but it wasn't. It wasn't till after the original that they actually do hook up. And she expressed her love for him.  In the Pain battle, but he totally ignores it until after the entire series is done and they do the movies. Oh and before anyone says his personality is different. I get that, but then he turns around and wants to jump the bones of other women in the village. Just not Hinata that makes it Hinata hater story. And he didn't just turn her down. He b** slapped her and p*** all over her carrying heart. Sorry I don't like those top stories and yes, I will comment on any story. I find any character acting like a complete douche to women.
I'm kind of one of Conan the Barbarian story lover. A guy can be forceful, but he doesn't have to be a douche.

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Part 2

Part 2 please

Part 2 please