You have to feel bad for whatever unfortunate young man that shows up wanting to date her.

You've outdone yourself on this one. I don't think I've heard a better story than this one. Great job.

His reaction to being bowed to should have been "Well, it must be Tuesday."

Finally a good story where the bad guy gets Rekt!

Good story. Unusual.

You earned your sub from me. I rarely find good HFY stories anymore. They're mostly AI slop with inconsistent timelines, plotholes, unnecessary political drama, but this was a well-told story with good pacing and didn't use cringey AI descriptions as padding. Well done.

Now that was a story any ex Marine would like! Ooh Rah!👍

I really enjoyed the lesson about looking beyond what is immediately visible. Very meaningful.

So there is indeed a new sheriff in town…

Good story well told, likable characters. I use these stories to get to sleep but i stayed for the whole story. Cheers.

A very good story.💯

Oddly I really liked that story..

actually, not bad. This one... this one is good.

This would make a great movie.

Good story!

Great story!!

Freakin'  AYYYY !!!

Love the story!

Fantastic!

Other than losing sync with the text, it was a pretty good story over all.