“Revisiting this abusive webtoon” do you know how little this narrows it down

I always love how the body rotting curses manage to skip the face

19:39 a WEEK??? A war ended in a WEEK???? This story had a cicada lifespan of good writing smack in the middle of absolute slop.

"The abusive webtoon" doesnt narrow it down enough

So this lady is supposed to be the most power witch of her time and has a bunch of offensive magic (i.e. fire and vines), yet is constantly captured and never seems to win a battle? Yeah that makes sense.
What's the point of giving her a bunch of powers if you just want her to be a generic damsel in distress who needs her male love interests to save her?

I sure do love when a terminally ill character doesn't display even something as small as dark circles under their eyes! /s



In the case it's a lie, I still want the protagonist to overthink normal exhaustion and lose sleep so I can suspend my disbelief more easily.

If it takes half a story before it gets good, that bad writing. You don’t have to “Reas the whole thing before you judge it”, because getting good 40 chapters in is too little too late!!!

Maybe his name is Krandle Kandle. Cause Matty is never wrong

Oh no… a sequel… I didn’t think it could get worse..

Edit: Oh my goodness she grew! Lariette actually reflected upon her actions! I didn’t see that coming but I’m so happy it happened! Will it last…















Spoiler alert: It still sucks… sighs.. we were SO CLOSE. SO CLOSE GUYS.

You really had me fooled, I thought for a sweet second this comic was going somewhere interesting :(

23:45 RIGHT i felt like they abandoned Doha at the end just to bring him back for a weird twilight fakeout ending with him and lariette’s daughter like i was legit worried they were about to reduce him to a jacob and renesme plot😓

The author: "The strongest witch"

Also the author: she always gets kidnapped and is defenseless and needs to be saved

...bro

I think a better way to introduce the characters would be like this:
Asrahan was cursed to have a rotten body, wrapping himself in bandages to prevent others from judging/bullying him. He gets abandoned by his family and village for his appearance and smell. Leading to him to want love, connection, and/or any kind of relationship with anyone. The church, disgusted by him, notices his potential, and uses his desperation for connection. Doha (who will be older then Asrahan) will take advantages of his desperation, by promising to heal his body in exchange for his loyalty. So, the church sends Asrahan to kill others, and fight in wars, leaving him emotionless and broken.

Then Lariette runs into him, she then proves that she can heal him, making Asrahan excited. He stops responding to the church's demands and asks Lariette to heal him in exchange for shelter and food. But because of the constant use of her powers, she becomes weak and needs her own healer. Doha, curious as to why Asrahan won't respond, goes to his estate, where he meets Lariette, seeing how "naive" she is, he takes advantage of her need of healing. He manipulates her against Asrahan so that he can go back to controlling him. But as time passes, he gets interested in her magical skill, slowly developing an obsession over her (kind of like the assassin Lariette's family sent)

"In media res" means "in the middle of action." Movies that start that way have the particuliarity of not showing the original status quo until later.
That also means that the actual conflict of the movie will be way heavier than we were first shown.

THE MOMENT I SAW YOU WALKING TOWARD THE CAVE ENTRANCE MY CAVE ALLEGORY SENSES WERE TINGLING SO HARD AND THE PAID OFF FEEL SO GOOD THANK YOU!

Oh that ending. We’re in for a trip. If you know, YOU KNOW!

Why does she turn blonde for a few chapters and then go back to pink? Or am I losing my mind? 😭

10:49 wait- does that mean Doha just has an inventory of diseases he’s taken from ppl that he can give to others at will?? 😭

The only reason I could come up with for why Asrahan didn't call on Doha to cure him is because then the story would be a BL instead which would have been more interesting ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

Make cucumber smell go away magic😭😭😭🙏