Ok in canon the Weasley Twins and Ron took their Dad's flying to Little Whinging to get Harry because they hadn't heard from him. In canon, they did that after the Dobby incident. Where were they? Did They not manage to sneak out to their Father's car? Or what? They still should have been able to fly the car to Harry's second floor bedroom window in the  dead of night and gotten Harry! Your current "What If" scenario has forgotten about the boys who flew a car to Surrey to get their friend  when they Ron hadn't heard from him.  You have forgotten that there was still time for them to arrive at his window in the dead of night to get him. Unless, once there, three redheads let Harry talk them out of his rescue? So that means any thing that happens after that point, is just as much their fault as Dobby's or Harry's.

I'm at the end, it gets no better.  Don't bother

I should have read the comments sooner. I'm 3/4 through it, and it just keeps repeating the same stuff over and over. The whole thing could be said in about ten minutes. This is a total time waster. Not worth listening to. I'm surprised it doesn't have more negative thumbs down.

14 minutes in and you've said nothing get on with it.

This is not a story

Yes it is a lousy collection of what ifs.