As someone with extreme ADHD that story was PROFOUND and Transcended on all levels and has details in narrative I’ve always wanted. It completely shattered, destroyed and rebuilt my entire emotional spectrum. This is the most technically brilliant piece of Dragon 🐉 Ball 🎱 literature that I’ve heard! It demands a next part PLEASE 🙏 o will literally pay you $100 to make it happen I’m not even joking. This story has fixed mental issues and struggles I’ve had my whole life. I feel reborn after that

ur stories just go in so much more detail, and implement ocs in ways that don’t feel forced, absolutely goated sir

This might be the best written story of all DBZ what ifs I've seen. Bravo 👏

I listened to ALL of this over two full shifts at work! Amazing. Thank you.

I'm already 2 hours in and I thought I was still only a half hour in, this story is amazing!!! Love your work man!

This was an absolute masterpiece of what if. I was on the edge of my seat pretty much the entire time and I don’t think I’ll ever be able to forget this one.

If you ever did a series of books, I would purchase them all.
You're story telling is classical.
It has all the emotions a great story needs. Great job and make so much more!!!
Thank you!

I just finished finished the story and subscribed, you are a genuinely great writer and great at telling the story you made, its the best fan made audio book i have listened to by far. The story was great and all but the main Aspect of what made it great is your skill of articulation, i subscribed because i want to hear more stories articulated by you. Anyway great work i respect the work you must have put Into this

You have earned another subscriber. This is one of if not the best dragon ball what if i have ever come across.

I work nights 12 hour shifts this got me thru half of it with a big smile on my face thank you so much for this masterpiece

I really liked the story, probably the best story teller there is about "what ifs"... only thing is that i noticed that some images doesn't follow the story. For example there was image of ssj4 with seals before the berus part and then when goku actully trasformed into that you didn't show the immage. Or for example it wouldbe cool to be able to see Ares

This was a one of a kind story .. top tier well done my guy

only idea/critique I have for your videos is it would be dope to have music changes throughout the video changing depending on the battle or scene for dramatic effect

i m barely in the end of the first arc and let me tell you sum. this what if already got an special place in my heart and im going to enjoy it,

But Frieza never knew of the dragonballs without the Saiyan Saga.

Absolutely a goat don't stop man

52:17 Dave's not here man 😂

Really loved the story!! I would love to see the new forms come to life though, some unique art would have really driven it all home for me.

I can’t believe I sat here and watched this for my whole shift thx good way for time to go by fast

goku is beyond god of destruction at 3:47:21 plus beerus at 70 percent can beat all gods of destruction with ease