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2:07 this change from Wilbur's rage into Phil's is so sick, I got goosebumps on my skin0_0

Wilbur learning about Tommy's exile and the daydream that follows is probably my favorite Revivebur moment

I love how when Wilbur realized dream was in the wrong the green in his eyes disappeared

Seeing how Wilburs gratefulness towards Dream faded as soon as he heard what Dream did to Tommy during the exile shows how much he caress about Tommy no matter what. This is one of my favorite scenes in the dsmp.🖤

Wilbur has more control that Dream.
I feel kind of bad that Dream's mike malfunctioned, but it kind of made things even more traumatizing.

Will is ligit the " I just want to talk to him. I just want to talk to him. "  * pulls out a sword *

The way you depicted the rage in Wilbur’s eyes, the brotherly affection you’ve depicted… chefs kiss you’re my fav animator

wilbur's character actually gives me chills. everyone in the smp was always a little too good at their characters XD

Wilbur being angry is officially more terrifying than Tommy being mad. (In my opinion. Everyone's is different.) I love everything about this animatic! Good job on making me feel genuine fear in the first 2 minutes.

Also, I was so glad I could watch you draw some frames live, it was a good time!

My favourite part of this is when wilbur pulled the sweetest face and said "Tommy could you please step away from where I'm going to put the lava" had my crying tears of crimeboys

Not Emily in the chat not knowing wtf I going on💀

I love how the green in his eyes quickly faded, and it transitioned to a Wilbur devoid of hope in dream

Wilbur beating Dream to death for what he did and flashing to Philza seeing what his son had done, what he had become and putting him down.... One of the things i love the most about your animatics is connecting things like that, subtle single frame moments that tie lore together.

The imagery when Wilbur is beating Dream up and screaming is so powerful. It really showcases all that overwhelming anger Wilbur felt and the fantasy he had of making Dream pay for what he did

I love how ypu had the green in wilburs eyes fade away from when he learned the truth, very epic

The way Wilbur reacts after hearing what Dream said is crazy amazing and scary

This is one of my favorite scenes I cannot wait

Edit: wtf that was the best thing I’ve ever witnessed.

Edit 2: the way Dream screamed so loud his mic clipped- 😭

IT feels like wilbur used dreams own tactics against him at that moment. Manipulation and guilt striping to get his way.

Holy crap this was amazing!!! The green fading from Wilbur's eyes, implying that Dream's manipulation wasn't controlling him anymore when Wilbur heard Tommy talk about the tower was a nice detail! The daydream scene was so gruesome and amazing!! Wilbur's rage transforming into Phil's rage, L'manburg Wilbur transitioning into Revived Wilbur. Wilbur literally reaching into Dream's Soul/Heart and crushing it, (Was that an undertale reference?). The green strings trying to reach Wilbur as Dream is getting beaten. (or the green strings are fading like the green in his eyes did.) I absolutely loved the horrifying, and deformed monster that Wil became when he screamed, "You B@$tard!!" Ahh it gave me chills!
Also I like the fact that Dream has Sam's crown on his arm as sort of armor, or souvenir, and that he has Tommy's handkerchief, and at the end Wilbur takes it back. I love the little details that you put into your animations! Great job as always!