I don't  think the listeners needed your step by step explanation. We are bright enough to get the point ourselves

Wealth doesn't make one rich. It's the heart and the character that goes with it - that's the vein of gold.

A good story, a good woman, and a strong man with kindness

I would have liked an ending that they had children and lived happily ever after

Love is love with or without riches.

It was a beautiful story,and she realized  he was as broken as her with money as she was without, the kind of man any good woman would understand!

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Where did the two guys come from in the wrong time period cloths?

Midlothian, VA. USA 9:30 A.M.

Ya, to detail.

I would definitely have forgiven him just as Rachel did. Watching from South Africa

Money can buy a lot of things, but it cant buy love, true happiness, dignity, worth, or character...among other things.
This was a sweet story...altho you need to get your periods straight. 😊❤

Yes he deserved forgiveness. We as humans believe other people's words about us.   When we do not know truth about ourselves.    Bought by the blood of Jesus child of God.   Thank you for the story

Ephesians 5:33 Explains the different expectations between a man and a woman . A man needs deep respect while a woman needs to know that she is loved by her mate . How does that relate to this fictional story ? Jonas Carver did not get the deep respect a man needs in his soul , not from Clarissa . The widow Rachael didn`t just need a hardworking man about the place . She needed someone solid in her life and under her roof. To Rachael she was not motivated by 11,000 acres or what it could buy . As adults we each have our different needs . Needs only noticed when we examine ourselves honestly and deeply .

Okay, all your yapping using two different voices I found very annoying.  I didn’t want to hear your repeated explanations over and over like you were talking to children, we already knew what he did, and why he did it.  If you had only left out all that nonsense and just let us hear their own ending in their words and brought the story further on after their marriage, it would have earned you a thumbs up from me, but you didn’t.  Once again another story that if it had been given to a woman to proof read, would have caught your errors in time to have made this a worth while story.  You had a good story line going for you, but you failed to completely see it through.  Don’t use that little squeaky voice with an accent again either.  It’s ridiculous.  Try again “Story West” channel, let’s see if you can improve enough to keep an audience better.  Volusia County,Florida USA

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